GRAVE DIGGERS - Part X (Finale)
I can't even begin to explain the chain of events that prevented me from making this post over the weekend.
The biggest obstacle, though, was the simple fact that after I re-read the original ending...I didn't like it. At all. I did remind myself that it's been three years since I first wrote Grave Diggers, and my writing style has grown and changed since then. It makes perfect sense that the ending doesn't make as much sense as it did before. So, I took the time to re-write Part X, and I'm much happier with it.
If any of the wonderful people who beta-read this novella for me have been following it's progress here on the blog, they'll notice that the key elements of the ending are still the same. It's how everything ties together that needed to be changed.
Despite all the delays, I hope everyone has enjoyed reading Grave Diggers! Fun fact: I actually have a sequel outlined and ready to be written, but I put it on the back burner in order to focus on my story published in Carolina Crimes, and Book Project #1 (Tom's Story). Keeping that in mind, if there is any interest in seeing the story continue here on the blog (for free!), please let me know!
*Please note, this final chapter of Grave Diggers does contain some violence.*
Thank you again, to everyone who has tuned in these last ten weeks as I've shared this story!
GRAVE DIGGERS
Part X:
Desi:
© Courtney Carter, http://writingdeskblog.blogspot.com, 2018. This is a work of fiction.
The biggest obstacle, though, was the simple fact that after I re-read the original ending...I didn't like it. At all. I did remind myself that it's been three years since I first wrote Grave Diggers, and my writing style has grown and changed since then. It makes perfect sense that the ending doesn't make as much sense as it did before. So, I took the time to re-write Part X, and I'm much happier with it.
If any of the wonderful people who beta-read this novella for me have been following it's progress here on the blog, they'll notice that the key elements of the ending are still the same. It's how everything ties together that needed to be changed.
Despite all the delays, I hope everyone has enjoyed reading Grave Diggers! Fun fact: I actually have a sequel outlined and ready to be written, but I put it on the back burner in order to focus on my story published in Carolina Crimes, and Book Project #1 (Tom's Story). Keeping that in mind, if there is any interest in seeing the story continue here on the blog (for free!), please let me know!
*Please note, this final chapter of Grave Diggers does contain some violence.*
Thank you again, to everyone who has tuned in these last ten weeks as I've shared this story!
*****
GRAVE DIGGERS
Part X:
Desi:
Puck
and Desi were led down a short hallway and through another door. The office they entered was massive, with a ceiling that extended high up into the next level of the building. The same utilitarian polymer tiles that
made up the interior of The Titan lined the floor, and all of the windows were shuttered by thick metal shades. A screen dominated the
opposite wall, with the most advanced computer panel Desi had ever seen installed at
its base. The panels themselves were mounted onto a raised platform that also
housed a metal desk and wide-backed chair.
Sitting
at the desk was a well-dressed man. His silver-fox hair was
swept back from a face that would have been handsome if it wasn't
dominated by razor-like cheekbones and narrow hazel eyes. They were Puck’s own
eyes set into a different face.
“That
will be all.” The man’s cool voice sent the guard away. He stood, moving
fluidly around the desk and down the short set of steps attached to the
platform. “Miss Desdemona, thank you for coming on such short notice. I am
Councilman Hilliard.” Puck’s father nodded at her before cutting his
gaze over to his son. “Puck. It’s been quite a while, hasn’t it?”
“Hilliard.”
Puck nodded stiffly. Desi shifted closer to him. “Why are we here?”
“No dancing around the question?” Hilliard’s lips twitched. “Perhaps these years in the military did you
some good after all.”
Puck
kept silent. Desi reached out and wrapped her hand around his.
The Councilman turned and climbed the short distance back onto
his platform. “You are here, because I received some rather disturbing information, which I hope the two of you can help explain.” He tapped button on the console, bringing it to life, then pulled up a series of audio files. They were all time
and date-stamped from the previous week. Hilliard selected a file and pressed a
series of keys on the panel.
A
thin, static-filled voice reverberated against the high ceiling:
“…if anyone can hear me, my name is Desdemona…I’m reaching out from the capital
city of the Nation…If anyone in one of the post-Quake nations can hear
me, please respond…”
The
recording cut off. Desi looked up at Puck. He kept his eyes on Hilliard, but his grip on her hand tightened.
“Imagine
my shock, my disappointment.” Hilliard continued, gazing at the screen.
“To know that one of my own people would attempt such a treasonous act.
Thankfully, our own communications personnel were able to intercept the
transmission before it could reach the outside.”
“Treason?”
Puck hissed. He moved to shield Desi. “How can that
possibly be considered treason?”
Hilliard
whipped around. “It is treason because I say
it is treason! The Council has declared any attempts to communicate with
peoples outside of the Nation to be a danger to us all.” He sneered, his upper
lip twisting disdainfully to one side. “For all we know, your young Intell friend
could have been trying to stir up an attack against us. Or inciting a rebellion.”
“No!” Puck shouted, “You don’t have the right
to –”
“The
Council Decides and Provides!” Hilliard bellowed from his place above them.
Desi
gripped the back of Puck’s jacket, but stood her ground as the Councilman paced
back and forth along the platform.
“If
the Council has decided that Miss
Desdemona and her ilk are a threat to our way of life, then we shall provide a solution. Our great Nation is going
to see many changes in the years to come, and now is the time to dispose of
what we no longer need. The Intells have worn out their usefulness, and will
all be arrested as enemies of the Nation with this recording as proof of their
underlying, motives.”
“You
can’t!” Desi lurched forward.
Puck
grabbed her arm, stopping her from going any closer.
“What
about the work we’ve done? All the research that helped rebuild the
Nation after the Quake? Does that mean nothing?”
“Of
course not.” Hilliard gave her his twitch of a smile. “The Intells’ work has benefited us more than you can possibly know. We are, without a doubt, the most
advanced of any civilization left after the Great Quake, and now is the time to
show our superiority to the rest of the world.”
Something
deep inside Desi's brain clicked. She stared in disbelief at Puck's father. Puck glanced down at her, and when their eyes met Desi knew he'd reached the same conclusion.
“Is
that why the military is building a naval base in the south, to attack these other people?" Puck asked. "If all you needed was land, why do
the squads only target graves and old religious sites? Why not tear down other
ruins if all we were doing was making space for you to start a war?”
The Grave Diggers
weren’t reclaiming land for the expansion of the Nation. They were honing their
abilities to destroy what was left of
the other civilizations, taking out any evidence of the pre-Quake peoples’
belief systems while they were at it. A
good squad could demolish a target site in minutes, what kind of
damage could they bring to an underdeveloped city?
“The
Great Quake proved one thing above all.” Hilliard pressed a key and the entire
screen filled with a map of the world as it was before the Quake. Great,
sprawling expanses of land, seven continents in all with countless islands in
between. “Left
to their own devices, humans will cling to their imaginary beliefs over the solid and reliable abilities of their leaders.”
Another
set of keys were tapped and the map shifted. Wide chunks of land dropped away
into the metallic blue representing the oceans until the five present, much
smaller continents of the world were left. Much like the map Sergeant Abalos
kept, there were wide patches of color marking different areas of the Nation.
The site of the future naval base was marked in red. Hilliard used a touch pad to press
onto the red and spread it out towards the remaining portions of land that
existed east of their own continent. Like a spider’s web, the red color
expanded to wrap around the other land masses, cutting them off from one
another.
“This
is what we have been working towards.” Hilliard’s voice filled with reverence
for the plan displayed above them. “The Intells’ findings allowed us to grow
leaps and bounds ahead of the rest of the world, no other nation has had such a
devoted researchers. They were permitted to continue ‘preserving our culture’
in case any new technologies were stumbled upon in the process, but now…” He
swept the map aside, fingers flying across the keys on the panel.
Thousands
of files popped up, filling the screen. Records and lists and photographs stacked
on top of one another.
Desi
gasped. “That’s
our work. All of it.” She whispered to Puck.
The
Councilman pressed a button at the top of the keyboard and a new window opened,
its message warning that once these files were deleted they could not be
recovered.
“No,
no, no!” Desi struggled against the grip Puck still had on her. “He’s going to
destroy it!”
“Father! Don't!” Puck shoved Desi back and raced to the platform. He made it halfway up the
stairs before his father turned.
“Father?
I believe that’s the first time you’ve ever called me that. You have been
spending too much time with the Intells, haven’t you?” Hilliard
had a handgun pointed at his son.
Puck stopped. “There aren’t supposed to be any guns left…”
“There
are certain privileges to being in the Council, my son. Privileges you would
have obtained before now, had you not been so thoughtless. I assumed five years
spent toiling as a Grave Digger would show you the error of your ways. Now, I see a
more direct method is requited.”
An
ear-splitting crack bounced off the
office walls.
Desi
clapped her hands over her ears and screamed.
Puck’s
body seemed suspended mid-climb on the platform steps before he collapsed like a
marionette suddenly without its strings. The momentum sent him backwards onto the floor. Shocked hazel
eyes gazed unblinking at the ceiling.
Desi
knelt beside him, her ears still ringing from the gunshot. She saw the hole ripped through the layers of material on the right
side of his chest. The soldiers never wore bullet-proof vests, because they'd never had to worry about the threat before.
Puck’s
sudden intake of breath sent a wave of crimson blood pouring out of the wound.
His pupils contracted, tried to focus on the anxious face hovering above him.
Desi tore off her woolen jacket and pressed it against the wound. She was
vaguely aware of the Councilman, still on his platform, observing them with a
critical eye.
“Puck
stay awake, please!” Desi choked back the rush of tears that burned behind her
eyes. She grabbed his hand and pressed it beneath hers on the jacket. Blood was
soaking into the material, making it harder to press it tightly against his
chest.
“There is
no need for panic.” Hilliard’s tone was entirely unsympathetic, almost bored. “I didn’t aim
to kill him, and he will be treated soon enough.” He turned back to the screen.
“First, we must finish what we've started.”
“Stop!”
Desi scrambled up
the platform. Hilliard closed the distance between them and drove his free
fist into Desi’s stomach. She dropped to the floor with a choked cry.
“Enough.”
The Councilman straightened his tie and replaced the gun in a holster beneath his suit jacket. His steps clicked sharply on the polished tiles as he
walked back to the panel. “Your obsession with ancient history has become more
than a mere annoyance.”
He clicked the highlighted confirmation square waiting at the bottom of the
screen.
Desi
curled into herself in horror and pain. Flashes of light flitted across the
screen. The computer sought out and obliterated nearly a hundred years’ worth of
data gathered by the Intells.
Her life’s work gone in a matter of minutes.
Sucking air into her lungs, she heaved onto her
hands and knees and crawled awkwardly down the steps to where Puck lay. His
blood had soaked through her jacket and was dripping down to pool on the floor.
“You
can’t do this.” She gulped, trying to press down on Puck’s wound again.
The
Councilman watched the last of the data fade away. “It is really for the best.
No one wants a world where the people are confused about who to believe.
Better to tell them where to place their faith, instead of descending into
anarchy again.”
Desi
wheezed around the pain in her stomach. Her abdominal muscles clenched and
protested the re-expansion required to stammer out words.
“The
other Council members…”
“What
other Council members? I have been given absolute authority by the Council, it
was their only choice unless they wanted to end up in the Prison on treason
charges of their own.”
Desi
straightened onto her knees, one hand still pressed down on Puck’s chest.
“I
don’t understand,” She said
“I
know you don’t understand right now.” Hilliard’s face was ghoulish in the glow of
the screen behind him. “But you will.” He flipped a switch mounted under the
rim of his desk.
Desi
heard the office door open. The guards were back.
She
looked at Puck. There was no hope of moving him even if the soldiers weren’t
blocking their way out. Puck was still breathing, but his eyes were unfocused.
His face had gone waxy pale and his forehead shined with sweat. The tears finally came when Desi clasped
their slippery, blood-soaked hands together. She leaned down as the guards drew
closer, pressed her lips close to Puck’s ear.
“I’m
so sorry, Puck. I should never have brought you into this.” A pair of hands
grabbed her shoulders while another guard pulled Puck’s body away from her. “Please,
don’t forget me.”
There
was a sharp, stinging pinch on the side of her neck. Desi had just enough time
to recognize that she’d been drugged before the darkness swam in and claimed
her.
*****
Desi woke several hours later with a bitter
taste in her mouth and a thumping headache. A wave of nausea hit and her
stomach rolled. She groaned and pressed her face into the cold floor until it passed.
“Desdemona?”
Artemis’s soft voice reached her through the fog. “Don’t worry, Dearest. We’re here.” A familiar hand rubbed her back until the queasiness
ended.
When
she was able to sit up, Desi found herself in a small windowless room with Artemis, Edmund, and a dozen other Intells.
The others were all asleep, huddled together in the opposite corner.
‘We’re in a cell…’ She thought fuzzily.
Desi's breath steamed in the cold chamber. She couldn’t remember a time in her entire
life when she’d ever been this cold. Where could they possibly
be?
Artemis
put an arm around her shoulders and pulled her close. Desi smiled weakly up at her
father, and saw a yellowish bruise blooming its way across his jaw. Twisting her
head around, she realized all of the people sitting in the cell looked more
than a little worse for wear. Edmund especially so. His shirt was ripped across
the front, several of his braids had come undone, and he was sporting an
impressive black eye.
“What
happened?” Desi asked.
“The
military swarmed the Village.” Edmund muttered, drawing his long legs up to
rest his elbows on his knees. “We’ve all been arrested as enemies of the
Nation.”
“Councilman
Hilliard!” Desi bolted upright, only to fall back against her father when a
fresh bout of nausea made her choke. She gritted her teeth. “He did this! I was there in
his office, he…Puck!” Her eyes swiveled wildly to Artemis. “He shot him, he shot his own son! Did they
bring Puck here too?”
“I’m
sorry.” Artemis shook his head. “They brought you alone.”
Desi
stared down at her hands resting in her lap. They were still painted red with
Puck’s blood. The front of her skirt was coated in it. Scarlet strips cracked
and peeled off as it dried.
“What’s
going to happen to us?” She asked.
“We
know they won’t kill us.” Edmund snorted. “They’ll send us up to the Prison.”
He shrugged at the sour face his uncle gave him. “Rather, they won’t kill
us right away.”
“I’m
so sorry.” Desi sniffed. “I didn’t mean for of this to happen.”
“It’s
not your fault.” Artemis stroked her disheveled braids. “The elders have known
for some time this was a possibility. The signs were there and they’ve been
preparing. That’s why the Council was only able to capture so few of us.” He
swept a hand out to include the other Intells sharing the cell with them.
“Everyone
else escaped? Why didn’t the two of you leave?” Desi’s brain circled
around the thought that her father and cousin could have gotten away.
“We
weren’t going to leave you.” Edmund squinted at her through his un-swollen eye
and tugged gently on one of her braids. “How much did they drug you, anyway?”
Desi
glared weakly before gripping Edmund's hand. She looked back to Artemis. “What are
we going to do, father?”
Artemis’
mouth settled into a grim line. “Whatever we have to do.” He took Desi’s
other hand, joining them into a small chain. “The others are out there. We
have to have faith they’ll come for us when the time is right.”
Desi leaned back against the icy cell wall. "Faith. Right."
*****
Puck:
Puck
was a creature of pure sensation. He felt the softness of the bed beneath him,
smelled the sharp tang of antiseptic. He could even hear snippets of the conversations
being held around him in calm, hushed tones. Though the words themselves weren’t
always clear.
Everything
Puck had been taught to believe about the Council’s purpose, about his position
as a Grave Digger, about his entire world, was now all twisted and ugly. It was so clear, and yet, right now he couldn't find the will to care. He
floated like this for a while, weightless and unconcerned with anything other
than the immediate stimuli around him. It was like one long, blissful train
ride.
There
was one moment during Puck’s stay in limbo, when a voice broke through the
haze. It had taken great effort to lift his eyelids and gaze up into hazel
eyes that matched his own.
“Hello,
Puck.” His father had fixed him with a taciturn stare – a scientist observing a
test subject that had reacted differently than predicted. “How are you
feeling?”
Puck
had tried to respond, but all of his energy was concentrated on keeping his
eyes open. He’d blinked slowly, his ability to focus quickly slipping.
Hilliard
had examined the IV bag hanging next to the bed, produced a syringe of milky
liquid and injected it into the tube connecting the bag to a vein in Puck’s arm.
As the solution blended with the IV fluid, Puck felt that amazing weightless
sensation returning. It had been such a relief to close his eyes again, he’d
barely caught his father’s last words before drifting off.
“Don’t
worry, Puck.” Hilliard had said as he emptied the last of the syringe’s contents. “You’ll feel much better soon.”
*****
Puck
was released from the infirmary three weeks later.
He’d
spent the first few days of his recovery drifting in and out of consciousness,
floating along on some powerful pain killers the army physician had prescribed.
The warped bullet they'd removed from his chest sat in a little glass jar on the bedside
table.
For
some reason he couldn’t name yet, Puck felt a strong desire to keep it.
Beth
had visited daily. Hilliard came when he could be spared from Council matters.
A few of the men in Puck's squad had stopped by as well, until Puck kicked them
out for horsing around with the medical equipment.
It
had been nice to get some rest after nearly five years of Grave Digger work,
especially with the new mission in the south due to begin soon. Puck stowed his belongings Beth had brought tohim in the infirmary back in his quarters and went
to find his squad.
Adjusting
the sling that kept his right arm elevated, Puck pushed open the door to the commissary. Out trickled a
wave of laughter, no doubt brought on by a soldier’s current
performance on one of the games.
“I’ll
be damned!” Caius spotted him first. “Our fearless leader!”
The
large soldier lurched to his side and slapped Puck none-too-gently on the back.
“Good
to see you too, Caius.” Puck grunted.
They
walked together to a table that had been commandeered by several of his squad
members. He was greeted warmly all around. One of the men retrieved Puck a
ration of ale, and it wasn’t long before they were begging for details of the
heroic exploits that had landed him in the infirmary in the first place.
“I
told you already/” Puck shook his head. “I don’t remember much, the doctors said my
body went into shock after I was shot.”
“Even so!”
A dark-eyed Scanner across the table pressed. “Can you believe it about those
Intells? Plotting against the Nation and hiding illegal weapons this whole
time! Lucky you were there when they tried to assassinate your father.”
“Too
bad they didn’t catch many of ‘em.” Caius cracked his knuckles.
“Should have known the rats would have a hole to escape through.”
Another
Burner chimed in: “Enemies of the Nation.”
“Outlaws.”
The Scanner across from Puck added.
“That
reminds me,” Caius shook his head. “You remember my cousin Antoine, the one assigned
to the Council guard?”
Puck
nodded, arranging his arm into a more comfortable position in the sling.
“He
was assigned to help load the Intells onto the Prison train, and he said one of
those freaks had blue eyes!” He
knocked back his own glass of ale.
“What?”
Puck frowned.
Caius’
block head bobbed up and down. “Some girl. He said when they were shutting the
train doors, she looks at him and through all those braids they wear, and
he sees she’s got these big blue eyes. Can you believe that? I told him he was
full of shit but he swears he saw them.”
Puck
felt a buzz, a tickle of something in the back of his mind. Some lone synapse
in his brain tried to conjure up a pair of cerulean eyes framed by dark lashes.
Eyes so blue, the rest of their owner’s face was made hazy by comparison.
‘Please, don’t forget me…’
Caius
thumped his fist on the table. “Hey Puck, you in there?”
Puck
snorted, the fleeting image evaporated before he could grasp it. He
turned to Caius and smirked.
“You and your cousin are
out of your damn minds, you know that?” Puck raised his glass in a toast with his
good hand. “There aren’t any people with blue eyes anymore.”
THE END
© Courtney Carter, http://writingdeskblog.blogspot.com, 2018. This is a work of fiction.
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